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Hi, wir sollen ein summary über die Amerikanische Flagge im gegensatz zur Freiheitsstatue. Grundlegend geht es darum das viele amerikaner (laut Aussage eines buches) geteilter Ansicht zur Flagge sind, während die Statue durchweg als positiv angesehen wird.
Geht mir hpts. um die Korrektur.
Generally the Americans have a divided view on the flag while the statue of liberty have only a positive association. For some the flag is a holy object and a symbol of pride whereas some people feel ashamed of it. A other point is that some think it tends to divide and some say it brings together. Also people want to protest again or destroy it. However completely different is the view of the Statue of liberty. People are proud of it and there is no controversy about/over it. Also it represents hope,democracy, freedom, equality and faith.Others say it transcends politics/idealogy. Its a emblem for all that is good in people.
Habe bis jetzt leider nur 113 Wörter, weis jmd. wie ich das ganze iwie mehr "Ausschmücken" kann das ich auf ca. 150 komme?
Im vorraus besten Dank.
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 23:58 Mo 18.08.2008 | | Autor: | jhwas |
Generally the Americans do have a divided view on their own flag while most of the people have a positive association with the Statue Of Liberty . For some people the flag is a holy object and a symbol of pride whereas some people feel ashamed of it. An other point is that some think it tends to divide and some say the flag would help to solve intercultural problems. Also people want to protest against it or even want to destroy it. However the view of the Statue of Liberty is completely different. People are proud of it and there is no controversy about it. It represents hope, democracy, freedom, equality and faith. Others say it transcends politics/idealogy. Its an emblem for all good attitudes a human can have.
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 06:51 Di 19.08.2008 | | Autor: | Somebody |
> Generally the Americans do have a divided view on their own
> flag while most of the people have a positive association
> with the Statue Of Liberty . For some people the flag is a
> holy object and a symbol of pride whereas some people feel
> ashamed of it. An other point is that some think it tends
> to divide and some say the flag would help to solve
> intercultural problems. Also people want to protest against
> it or even want to destroy it. However the view of the
> Statue of Liberty is completely different. People are proud
> of it and there is no controversy about it. It represents
> hope, democracy, freedom, equality and faith. Others say it
> transcends politics/idealogy. Its an emblem for all good
> attitudes a human can have.
Noch ein kleines Fehlerchen: It's
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 01:53 Di 19.08.2008 | | Autor: | leduart |
Hallo
Verlaengern kannst du, wenn du erklaerst, warum sich manche schaemen. What shamefull things did americans do under their flac?
Verbesserung hast du ja schon
Gruss leduart
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