Chicago Blues-Referat < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 19:19 Mo 31.01.2005 | | Autor: | Larissa |
Hallo zusammen!
Ich muss am Mittwoch einen Vortrag über den Chicago-Blues halten. Miit dem Thema habe ich eigentlich keine Probleme, aber meine Lehrerin hat mich irgendwie total verunsichert, da sie andauernt sagt, dass mein Englisch viel zu umgangssprachlich und amerikanisch sei!
Kann vielleicht mal jemande meine Sitchworte durchgucken, ob mein Englisch halbwegs ok ist? Das wäre wirklich lieb!
Viele Grüße
Larissa
Chicago Blues
- the most famous Blues-style, because of its special feeling and sound
- the sound of a harmonica/mouth-organ, slide-guitars, a boogie piano, a rhythm group and an impressive singing
- its sound reminds us to little noisy bars of the South Side of Chicago or little Combos performing Sunday morning in the Maxwell Street
- it was the first Blues-style, who reached a bigger public all around the world
- How did this style of Blues develop?
- Even there were a lot of Blues musicians before the Second World War, it has grown big after it.
- The history will give us a key to understand this development
- After the second world war a lot of blacks came to the north, as they longed for a better life and better jobs
- Because of this migration Chicago earned more money, which was important for the economic situation
- New labels were created, which had a great influence to the development of music, especially the Blues-music
- The migrants got used to the life in the life in Chicago without forgetting their roots
- They changed the music, made it dirtier and played with more realism and emotion
- One day Muddy Walters arrived in Chicago, which meant the success of Blues music.
- He changed the sound by making it more electrical
- It was the sound the public had waited for and the birth of the typical Chicago-Blues
- His first Band, consisting of great musicians, was called the Headhunters.
- One of his musicians, Little Walter, created an own way of playing the harmonica. This style became a standard for all the other bands following.
- More and more bands, who copied the style of Muddy Water where created, Chicago became the centre of Blues music
- A lot of musicians, who became famous later on, started their career by playing Blues music in the Maxwell Street
- But the success of the Chicago Blues did not last forever. In the 1950th the Rockn Roll fever started to grow, Elvis Presley became the new star. The Blues had a baby, and they named it Rockn Roll
- But there where some young musicians from the West Side of Chicago, who helped the Chicago Blues to survive.
- They combined the traditional Blues with a Rock-Groove, funky Beats, modern guitar-sounds and more bass
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 21:29 Mo 31.01.2005 | | Autor: | mattes |
Hi,
das liest sich doch ganz gut!
Mir sind eigentlich nur Kleinigkeiten aufgefallen:
- in Zeile 10 würde ich z.B. schreiben, ...their number has grown ( oder become) bigger.
-One day Muddy Walters arrived in Chicago, which meant the success of Blues music - Was genau willst Du mit diesem Satz aussagen?
Ansonsten sind mir noch wenige Komma-Fehler aufgefallen, die aber, wenn Du deine Stichpunkte nicht abgeben musst, egal sein sollten.
Viel Glück am Mittwoch
Gruß
mattes
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 21:38 Mo 31.01.2005 | | Autor: | Larissa |
Erstmal vielen Dank für die Hilfe  !
Hm, was ich mit dem Satz sagen wollte. Ich wollte sagen, dass erst durch Muddy Walters der Blues zu dem wurde, was er heute ist. Jedenfalls dass Muddy Walters eine entscheidende Rolle in der Entwicklung des Blues spielte und ihn somit zum Erfolg führte. Meine Formulierung ist aber wirklich komisch. hast du vielleicht einen besseren Vorschlag?
Nochmal vielen Dank!
Larissa
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 23:06 Mo 31.01.2005 | | Autor: | mattes |
Hallo,
wie wäre es denn mit sowas, wie:
Muddy Walters made decisive developments in ...
oder
Blues music became more famous by the work of Muddy Walters.
In diesem Sinne,
bis dann.
mattes
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